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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 18:06, 19 December 2022 (UTC)

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Improved to Good Article status by A person in Georgia (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 00:03, 23 November 2022 (UTC).

  • @Onegreatjoke: More of a comment than a review for now, but I'm not sure if this hook is going to intrigue anyone who isn't a Breaking Bad fan or is unfamiliar with Esposito or Gus Fring. Can you propose some other hooks here? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:25, 23 November 2022 (UTC)
I'll propose these for now
  • "... that a scene in "Axe and Grind" would have included a crane but the cameraman refused to execute it?"
  • "... that "Axe and Grind" has a 100% rating on rotten tomatoes?"
Might think of more later but ill see if you like it Narutolovehinata5. Onegreatjoke (talk) 21:13, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
I think there might be some promise with the crane hook but it may need to be revised somehow; the wording sounds strange. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:19, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
I'd rewrite it as something like this:
ALT3 ... that a scene in "Axe and Grind", an episode of Better Call Saul, was supposed to be filmed with a crane but was changed because the cameraman declined to execute it?
I understand this is longer than the original hook, but I think it flows better. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:19, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Full review needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:27, 9 December 2022 (UTC)
    • Article was promoted to Good Article within seven days of nomination. Plenty long enough. As I understand it, plot summaries for articles on fictional works don't require citations as they implicity cite the episodes themselves as sources. Article is neutral, and I could find no close paraphrasing. The corresponding sentence in the article about the crane as originally phrased—"He originally wanted to film the parking lot sequence with a crane that would leave and return to the characters as they talked"—confuses me as it makes it sound like the characters would've left the frame. I reworded the sentence to clarify what I think Esposito meant: telescoping away from the characters and meeting them at their final blocking point. ALT3 is incorrect because the shot was not supposed to show a crane, it was supposed to be filmed with a crane (crane shot). Pinging @Onegreatjoke and Narutolovehinata5:. DigitalIceAge (talk) 05:13, 17 December 2022 (UTC)
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