Template:Did you know nominations/Axalta Coating Systems

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:34, 3 August 2016 (UTC)

Axalta Coating Systems edit

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... that NASCAR driver Jeff Gordon is a global business advisor for his longtime sponsor Axalta Coating Systems?

ALT1:... that NASCAR driver Jeff Gordon is a global business advisor for Axalta Coating Systems, which sponsored him since his first NASCAR Sprint Cup Series race?
Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Shotton Surface Mine

Created /expanded by ZappaOMati (talk). Self-nominated at 19:00, 28 July 2016 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: The lead is too short for an article of that length. Nothing about the company's involvement in motorsports field was mentioned in the lead. Please address this issue. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga ✉ 12:57, 1 August 2016 (UTC)

@Krishna Chaitanya Velaga: Lead expanded. Zappa 24 Mati 17:06, 1 August 2016 (UTC)

@ZappaOMati: The nomination is good to go with primary ALT. But ALT1 has some issues. It should be which had sponsored ... as Axalta Coating Systems is a company or a person. And the next correction that I don't think that the word had is to be used. Because it suggests that the company is no longer sponsoring the mentioned driver. It would be good if it changed to which sponsored .... Please make the corrections accordingly if it is to approved with any of the hooks else the nomination is GTG with the first hook. In that case strike out ALT1. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga ✉ 02:47, 2 August 2016 (UTC)

@Krishna Chaitanya Velaga:

Done Zappa 24 Mati 02:52, 2 August 2016 (UTC)

GTG with any of the hooks. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga ✉ 03:08, 2 August 2016 (UTC)