- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:56, 21 October 2017 (UTC)
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Ashley Hatch edit
- ... that American soccer player Ashley Hatch helped the North Carolina Courage win the 2017 NWSL Shield and was named a NWSL Rookie of the Year finalist?
- ALT1:... that Ashley Hatch helped the North Carolina Courage win the 2017 NWSL Shield?
- ALT2:... that Ashley Hatch was named 2017 NWSL Rookie of the Year and helped the North Carolina Courage win the 2017 NWSL Shield with seven goals in 24 games?
- Reviewed: Arago hotspot
5x expanded by Hmlarson (talk). Self-nominated at 08:20, 15 October 2017 (UTC).
Expansion confirmed, no obvious copyvio, and looks in a decent condition regarding referencing, MOS, etc. Hooks are suitably interesting, might you consider being clearer on how she helped them win the shield (i.e. 7 goals in 24 games) or would you prefer to remain vague about it? If the former, then I'd amend ALT 1, if the latter then I'd go with the original hook. Let me know. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:40, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: She was named Rookie of the Year yesterday. I added this to the article, re-worked the lead and am proposing ALT 2 as the hook. Let me know what you think. Hmlarson (talk) 03:33, 19 October 2017 (UTC)
I approve all blurbs, but favour ALT2. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:12, 19 October 2017 (UTC)
