Template:Did you know nominations/Arturia MiniBrute

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:56, 25 August 2015 (UTC)

Arturia MiniBrute edit

Created by Boomur (talk). Self-nominated at 20:12, 6 August 2015 (UTC).

  • - date and length are good, well written. The hook fact is cited to an online source. Did three source checks for paraphrasing, looks good. I would include "synthesizer" in the hook, as it's not clear to non-experts what we are talking about (couldn't come up with an ALT, sorry). One issue - the lead states: "the product has generated ... a resurgence in the popularity of analog monosynths" - this is not explicitly stated/cited on the text as far as I could see? Best, The Interior (Talk) 17:40, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
  • @The Interior: thanks, i've just removed that line for now as i can't find a citation that is explicit enough about it. i've also added the word "synthesizer" to the hook per your suggestion. hope it's good to go now. Boomur [] 15:06, 19 August 2015 (UTC)
  • , Boomur, sorry for the late response, have been on the road. Thanks for the changes, this is ready to go. The Interior (Talk) 15:03, 24 August 2015 (UTC)