Template:Did you know nominations/Archon of Pella

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The result was: withdrawn by nominator, closed by Narutolovehinata5 (talk) 01:14, 21 November 2021 (UTC)
Nominator has indicated that they no longer have the time to address the issues.

Archon of Pella

5x expanded by MRichards01 (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 04:16, 10 October 2021 (UTC).

  • @Casliber: Meets newness requirements, article just shy of 5× expansion at 2042 bytes (2085 needed to fully qualify). Willing to let it slide but I'm sure we can squeeze a few more words somewhere. Very slightly tweaked the hook to include the "BC". QPQ checks out. I can just about verify the hook fact in the cited article in Italian with machine translation, but the corresponding sentence in the article needs a citation directly after it. It's also not super interesting; perhaps we can mention his defeat to Dokimos somehow? (I am far from a scholar of ancient Greece but it's interesting how they're both Generals of Alexander the Great! Is their pitting against each other after Alexander's death not relevant?) DigitalIceAge (talk) 05:30, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review -Not my area of expertise but will have a go....might take some thinking about...Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 22:56, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
@Casliber and DigitalIceAge: How does this sound? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 22:13, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
I like it. Been meaning to get back to this.....had to do some adulting....Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 22:41, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
Also just to clarify DigitalIceAge, the requirement is 1500 characters, not 2085 bytes. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 22:47, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
@Narutolovehinata5: I like it too. Re bytes: I'm referring to the post-expansion size. Before expansion: 417 prose bytes, so 2085 bytes needed for expansion. Currently: 2041 bytes DigitalIceAge (talk) 23:46, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
I see. Apologies for the misunderstanding! Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:48, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
No problem. Also no worries Casliber, take your time. DigitalIceAge (talk) 00:23, 5 November 2021 (UTC)
As it's been another two weeks, pinging Cas Liber to see whether they expect to return soon. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:09, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
Just can it. I am not familiar with the are and have alot going on at present. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:20, 19 November 2021 (UTC)
Noted. Closing as withdrawn. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 01:14, 21 November 2021 (UTC)