Template:Did you know nominations/Angeline Murimirwa
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:05, 13 January 2018 (UTC)
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Angeline Murimirwa edit
... that Angeline Murimirwa received money for secondary education from Camfed, and is now a regional executive director there?- ALT1:
... that Angeline Murimirwa is the regional executive director for Camfed in Southern & Eastern Africa? - ALT2:
... that Zimbabwean Angeline Murimirwa was included in the 2017 BBC 100 Women list of the most influential women?
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- Reviewed: Morgan Morgan Monument
Created by Joseph2302 (talk). Self-nominated at 00:46, 24 December 2017 (UTC).
Interesting life, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. I'd like to see improvements for hooks and article, not necessary for approving but worth thinking about, I hope. My wording for hooks would be something like this:
- ALT3:... that Angeline Murimirwa received money for her secondary education from Camfed, and is now its regional executive director for Southern & Eastern Africa?
- ALT4:... that Angeline Murimirwa, the regional executive director for Camfed in Southern & Eastern Africa, was included in the 2017 BBC 100 Women list of the most influential women?
- Article:
- I feel that it is too short for two headers, and could do without any.
- I feel it is to short, not in number of characters, but telling me nothing about what she actually does, but plenty about recognition. Please summarize briefly what Camfed does, for a minimum.
- The children come rather suddenly ;)
- How do you feel about an infobox? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:02, 24 December 2017 (UTC)
- Gerda Arendt I agree ALT3/4 sound better. Have combined the text into one section, and added some more info about Camfed. Joseph2302 (talk) 00:19, 27 December 2017 (UTC)
- Thank you! Just a qpq, and we are set. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:05, 27 December 2017 (UTC)
- QPQ done at Template:Did you know nominations/Morgan Morgan Monument. Joseph2302 (talk) 11:29, 27 December 2017 (UTC)
--Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:01, 27 December 2017 (UTC)
- Thank you! Just a qpq, and we are set. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:05, 27 December 2017 (UTC)
