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The result was: promoted by Oceanh (talk) 17:10, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
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Andrew Bolon edit
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that the 1855 death of Andrew Bolon, one of the first law enforcement officer to die in the line of duty in the present-day U.S. state of Washington, contributed to the outbreak of the Yakima War?
Created by BlueSalix (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 05:48, 19 May 2014 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. The hook is sourced reliably but I have substituted "contributed to" for "led to". I detected no policy issues. I think the hook is too wordy and would prefer
- ALT1 ... that the 1855 death of law enforcement officer Andrew Bolon contributed to the outbreak of the Yakima War? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:19, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
