Template:Did you know nominations/Andreas Panayiotou (businessman)
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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 17:25, 7 November 2015 (UTC)
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Andreas Panayiotou (businessman) edit
- ... that Andreas Panayiotou was once the UK's largest private landlord, until he sold up in 2006–07 and moved into hotels?
- ALT1:... that Andreas Panayiotou was kicked out of school, aged 14, for punching his teacher, and became an amateur boxing champion and the UK's largest private landlord?
- Reviewed: David Wecht
- Comment: Other hooks welcome
Created by Edwardx (talk). Self-nominated at 22:20, 12 October 2015 (UTC).
age and size ok, written neutrally, hook sourced and faithful to source material. Earwig's copyvio negative. Just missing QPQ. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:36, 4 November 2015 (UTC)
- I'd like to suggest a slight wording change to ALT1:
- ALT1a: ... that Andreas Panayiotou was kicked out of school at the age of 14 for punching his teacher, and became an amateur boxing champion and the UK's largest private landlord?
- It has a few more characters, but I think it's actually "punchier" because the extra commas aren't there forcing pauses.
- Also, I'm presuming that "sold up" is a UK colloquialism I'm not familiar with, but it looks odd to me. —GrammarFascist contribstalk 14:36, 5 November 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you Cas Liber and GrammarFascist. I've just done a QPQ review. Yes, "sold up" is a common enough expression here, meaning sold everything. Perhaps we could use "sold everything" instead, even if unlikely to be literally true. Edwardx (talk) 15:14, 5 November 2015 (UTC)
- You're welcome, Edwardx. I think it's clear enough from context what "sold up" means here that it doesn't necessarily have to be changed, though "sold everything" is a good alternative that would be clearer to more readers. Strictly speaking that's not a grammar issue, but a style one, so I'll leave it to you to decide which you prefer. —GrammarFascist contribstalk 15:27, 5 November 2015 (UTC)
- I have no preference GrammarFascist, so why don't we leave it to our experienced reviewer, Casliber, to choose. Edwardx (talk) 15:47, 5 November 2015 (UTC)
