Template:Did you know nominations/American Jewish cuisine

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:05, 29 August 2017 (UTC)

American Jewish cuisine edit

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... ~~that American Jewish cuisine was heavily influenced by the cuisine of Jewish immigrants who came to the United States from Eastern Europe around the turn of the 20th century?~~ Source: pp. 82–88

Reviewed: East Redmond, Washington

Created by Mudwater (talk). Nominated by Northamerica1000 (talk) at 23:57, 9 August 2017 (UTC).

Yes, I did, like everybody else. There must be a better hook! (just commenting, not reviewing)Johnbod (talk) 02:23, 13 August 2017 (UTC)

I also knew that and agree with Johnbod that there are better hooks out there. These might feauture the less visible Jewish cuisines in America, such as Sephardic, Arabic, Ethiopian and other culinary influences from the Diaspora. Morganfitzp (talk) 20:30, 13 August 2017 (UTC)

New review needed. See alt below. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 02:32, 26 August 2017 (UTC)
ALT1: ... that within American Jewish cuisine, whether a person prefers their gefilte fish to be savory or sweet may correlate with which region of Eastern Europe their ancestors came from? (Source)

Interesting hook. Could be tightened up and have a more definitive punch than "may correlate" (because it also might not correlate). Here's an example:

ALT2: ... that American Jewish cuisine has been influenced by a geographical gefilte fish line?

...which is a bit mysterious—a mystery that may correlate to a lot of mouse clicks! Morganfitzp (talk) 03:05, 26 August 2017 (UTC)

Hello. Just thought I'd chime in. I think ALT2 or something similar would be good. As Morganfitzp said, it's punchy, and slightly mysterious. — Mudwater^(Talk) 14:01, 26 August 2017 (UTC)

ALT2 is pretty good. Maybe needs a bit more context, or maybe not. Nb. Struck the first "boring" hook atop. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:17, 26 August 2017 (UTC)

Sounds like folks are good with ALT2. I hereby recommend this for DYK. Morganfitzp (talk) 17:19, 26 August 2017 (UTC)

Hi Morganfitzp: Just a note that a full review that addresses all of the points of the WP:DYKRULES will be needed for this to actually move forward. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 01:32, 27 August 2017 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting:
Other problems:

Image eligibility:

Freely licensed:
Used in article:
Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: (This is my first time filling this out and I hope I've done it right.) Morganfitzp (talk) 02:47, 27 August 2017 (UTC)