Template:Did you know nominations/Advanced Vista Optimizer

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was no consensus to promote after 12 days. The hook reads like an advertisement. At Template:Did you know nominations/Advanced SystemCare, Worm That Turned (talk · contribs) wrote:

What's more, the hook looks like advertising. I've looked through about a dozen sourced, and read the article a dozen times, and yet I cannot see a single fact that if put on the main page as a hook would not look like advertising.

The same is applicable here. Cunard (talk) 23:28, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

Advanced Vista Optimizer edit

Created/expanded by Porchcorpter (talk). Self nom at 19:18, 16 September 2011 (UTC)

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