Template:Did you know nominations/A Tour of the White House with Mrs. John F. Kennedy
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 09:40, 21 April 2015 (UTC)
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A Tour of the White House with Mrs. John F. Kennedy edit
... that Jackie Kennedy's tour of the White House was the first American prime-time documentary aimed at a female audience?
- Reviewed: Elda Emma Anderson
Created by Gareth E Kegg (talk). Self-nominated at 21:45, 10 April 2015 (UTC).
Long enough, new enough, hook cited, sources look fine, good to go. The only comment I can make is that the page uses DMY format, though it's an American special, so per MOS:DATETIES, MDY should be used. Zappa24Mati 02:39, 11 April 2015 (UTC)
- The hook is not grammatically correct; the tour wasn't a documentary, A Tour of the White House with Mrs. John F. Kennedy was. Here is an alt:
- ALT1: ... that A Tour of the White House with Mrs. John F. Kennedy was the first American prime-time documentary aimed at a female audience? Yoninah (talk) 22:05, 11 April 2015 (UTC)
- That's much better. I'll fix the dates. Thank you. Gareth E Kegg (talk) 07:32, 12 April 2015 (UTC)
- I think the dates have been fixed by User:Imzadi1979. Gareth E Kegg (talk) 20:18, 12 April 2015 (UTC)
