- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:04, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
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AMES Type 82 edit
Type 82 at Malvern
- ... that the AMES Type 82 3D radar got a job with Archie, then tended Bloodhounds, and finally found steady work in air traffic control?
Source: the hook is spread across many sections of Gough.
Created by Maury Markowitz (talk). Self-nominated at 21:50, 25 January 2018 (UTC).
Article was created today so is long enough. I AGF on the hook which is to an offline book published by the RAF's Air Historical Branch. The hook is interesting; it is inline cited, though not to a single sentence, but rather is a compilation of three specific source-points in the artilce. The accompanying photo is public domain. Article is NPOV and of correct length. Earwig returns copyvio unlikely at 8.3%. It doesn't appear a QPQ has been done, however, Maury Markowitz? Chetsford (talk) 01:24, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
- Comment: I think 'AAA' and 'SAMs' may lead to readers not clicking on the link. Perhaps replace "...AAA, moved to SAMs..." with "...artillery..." or another suitable term or phrase. This is, of course, just my opinion. Mindmatrix 15:47, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
- @Mindmatrix: How about this verion? Maury Markowitz (talk) 02:16, 2 February 2018 (UTC)
- Comment: I think 'AAA' and 'SAMs' may lead to readers not clicking on the link. Perhaps replace "...AAA, moved to SAMs..." with "...artillery..." or another suitable term or phrase. This is, of course, just my opinion. Mindmatrix 15:47, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
QPQ Ruffle Bar Maury Markowitz (talk) 02:24, 2 February 2018 (UTC)
- @Chetsford: Do you mind updating the tick now that the QPQ is done? Check the hook, I did not really change it, just used a nick-name. Maury Markowitz (talk)
