Talk:Zach Hankins/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:50, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Am reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 14:50, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Early life and high school career edit
- Wikilink points, rebounds and shooting to their respective articles to help those unfamiliar with basketball
- "In the fall of 2013," - please avoid mentioning seasons per MOS:SEASON
- "Hankins was running up the floor and stopped abruptly, breaking his foot." - you can say it was the left foot Hankins broke as stated by The Detroit News
- "so he committed to the Bulldogs." - make it clear that Hankins committed to playing college basketball for the Bulldogs.
College career edit
- Wikilink Bevo Francis Award
- Wikilink block to Block (basketball) on the first time the term is mentioned and field goal percentage
- "for top small college player" - for the top
- Wikilink National Player of the Year to NABC Player of the Year
- Add a link to most valuable player for non-Basketball readers
- "but stuck with new coach Travis Steele after Steele said Hankins was still a priority. " - remained
- "He led the Musketeers to a 19-16 record and had 13 points, nine rebounds and two assists in a 78-76 overtime loss" - replace the hyphens with en dashes (–) per MOS:DASH
- "in the second round of the NIT." - the 2019 National Invitation Tournament.7
References edit
- Reference 6: "Ferris State basketball wins Division II national championship, 71-69"." - en dash please
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to action/respond to the queries raised here. MWright96 (talk) 16:58, 7 April 2020 (UTC)