Talk:Your Song (Rita Ora song)/GA1

Latest comment: 9 months ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:31, 4 August 2023 (UTC)Reply


  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. (reference section):  
    b. (citations to reliable sources):  
    c. (OR):  
    d. (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. (major aspects):  
    b. (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):  
    b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:  

(Criteria marked   are unassessed)

Reunited again for the GAN backlog! --K. Peake 07:31, 4 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead edit

  • Infobox looks good!
  • "with many highlighting Ora's" → "who mostly highlighted Ora's"
  • "and the song's music and lyrics." → "and the music and lyrics." to avoid overusage of the song
  • "reaching the top 10" mention this was in countries such as, then listing those three and edit the top 50 count accordingly for any fellow top 10 positions listed there
  • "as well asquintuple platinum" → "as well as quintuple platinum"
  • "premiered to Ora's YouTube channel on" → "premiered to YouTube on" since this is too much info for the lead
  • "Ora performed the song at" → "Ora performed it in 2017 at"
  • The Ellen DeGeneres Show and The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon should be stylized with uppercase T's per MOS:THEMUSIC on titles

Background and composition edit

  • Img looks good!
  • In the second sentence, use the title in the first part rather than the second instance
  • "She further commented that "Ed" → "She further commented, "Ed" per this being a full sentence and also move the punctuation inside the quote marks for MOS:QUOTE
  • I don't think the second album introduction is needed per this being mentioned in the lead and if so, change to Ora's instead of her
  • "by singing lines such as" → "by singing lines such as,"
  • "I'm in love"." → "I'm in love.""

Critical reception edit

  • "Ludovic Hunter-Tilney from Financial Times" → "Ludovic Hunter-Tilney from the Financial Times"
  • the IndependentThe Independent per MOS:THEMUSIC
  • the Line of Best FitThe Line of Best Fit per above
  • "detected the song to "tappe into" → "detected the song "tapped into" per the source
  • the New York TimesThe New York Times
  • "experience' than that"." → "experience' than that."" per MOS:QUOTE
  • AllMusic should not be italicised

Commercial performance edit

  • The debut position is not mentioned by the source
  • Add that it was Ora's second most successful song in the country per the source
  • "peaked atop the" → "peaked atop the Billboard"
  • "of Belgium, Ireland, and Scotland." → "of Belgium, Ireland and Scotland."

Music video and promotion edit

Track listing edit

  • Good

Charts edit

Weekly charts edit

  • Good

Year-end charts edit

  • UK Singles (Official Charts Company) → UK Singles (OCC)

Certifications edit

  • Certifications for "Your Song" → Certifications and sales for "Your Song"

Release history edit

  • Remove United Kingdom from this table since no release format is specified

See also edit

References edit

  • Copyvio score looks great at 29.1%!!
  • Are you sure about ref 4's reliability since it is a music blog?
  • Cite Musicnotes.com as publisher instead on ref 8
  • Author-link Jon Pareles and Jon Caramanica on ref 22
  • Cite AllMusic as publisher instead on ref 25
  • WP:OVERLINK of Billboard on ref 92
  • WP:OVERLINK of Official Charts Company on ref 110

Final comments and verdict edit

  •   On hold until all of the issues are fixed; that went quickly and was smooth! --K. Peake 20:06, 4 August 2023 (UTC)Reply
    Hey @Kyle Peake: thank you for another review. I will start addressing the issues within the forthcoming 24 hours, as I am currently on vacation. Iaof2017 (talk) 12:29, 10 August 2023 (UTC)Reply
    Hey again Kyle Peake, I have fixed the issues now. If you encounter any further problems, please let me know. Thanks! Iaof2017 (talk) 13:02, 11 August 2023 (UTC)Reply
     Pass now, I only edited the typo so great job! --K. Peake 16:24, 11 August 2023 (UTC)Reply