Talk:Young Sohn

Latest comment: 3 years ago by LeannaTruong in topic Requested Edits/Updates for Young Sohn

Edit Requests

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Hi,

I work with Young Sohn and was hoping someone could make the following edits. As I understand it, I can't or shouldn't make these edits because of my COI.

  • Add an infobox to the page.
  • Add information about Co-Founding Extreme Tech Challenge (XTC), a startup competition for entrepreneurs addressing global challenges.
  • Add an Awards and recognition section, with

Thanks, 160.72.96.42 (talk) 15:52, 17 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

Hi,
Happy to help. You might want to consider creating a Wikipedia user page, which you can do here
  • Infobox is an easy fix. I'll add that.   Implemented
  • Same with picture   Implemented
  • It looks like only Cheddar has Sohn as a founder, so I'll use that one. The others just talk about him being a judge, unless I'm missing something. (Used Cheddar and The Verge)   Implemented
  • I'll check for precedent for the Awards section, but those sources look fine.   Implemented
--FeldBum (talk) 16:47, 17 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

The awards seem reasonable to me. Snappytimez (talk) 19:53, 12 August 2020 (UTC)Reply

Cool, how about this? Tagging 160.72.96.42
In 2019, Sohn was honored with a Trail Blazer award at the Asia America Multitechnology Association 40th anniversary dinner and with a Corporate Leader Award by the Korean American Community Foundation of San Francisco.
--FeldBum (talk) 20:18, 19 August 2020 (UTC)Reply
That works, thank you! Can you also add some context for XTC, like "a nonprofit startup competition that aims to address United Nation's 17 Sustainability Goals" -160.72.96.42 (talk) 20:38, 19 August 2020 (UTC)Reply
Sure. Changed to "United Nations' 17 Sustainable Development Goals," for punctuation and the canonical name of the initiative. Found https://www.alphagamma.eu/opportunities/extreme-tech-challenge-2020/ as a source. --FeldBum (talk) 04:55, 21 August 2020 (UTC)Reply

Requested Edits/Updates for Young Sohn

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Can someone help me with a few more edits to this page?

Thanks, LeannaTruong (talk) 13:54, 19 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

Please see my comment on your talk page. GSS💬 16:04, 19 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
Hey LeannaTruong. Made those edits. I rewrote and put where it made most sense. I'm not sure what you mean by "better source for XTC" so I just added it. I think there are more than enough cites there now. --FeldBum (talk) 21:05, 25 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
Hey FeldBum. Thank you very much for your help. These edits look great. LeannaTruong (talk) 15:43, 26 April 2021 (UTC)Reply