Talk:You Go to My Head (film)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:58, 8 October 2020 (UTC)

Will review for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 18:58, 8 October 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• Wikilink romantic thriller and post-traumatic amnesia
• "with review-aggregation websites Rotten Tomatoes and Metacritic giving 67% and 69% positive reviews, respectively." - the percent symbol should be replaced by words per MOS:PERCENT

Synopsis

• "The woman struggles to come to grips with who she is," - understand who she is,

Production

• The wikiink for Delfine Bafort is not needed
• "The actor Svetozar Cvetković was approached by co-producer Zoran Tasic a few weeks before principal photography began." - how many weeks exactly?

Unknown — the source says a few weeks. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 11:48, 9 October 2020 (UTC)

• "He was "very taken by the story"," - according to whom?
• "with intimate scenes with Svetozar Cvetkovic," - his surname is only needed

Release

• "where it won Best Directing and Special Jury awards." - won the Best

Critical response

• "the film holds an approval rating of 67% based on nine reviews," - the % symbol should be spelt out per MOS:PERCENT; also Rotten Tomatoes currently says it is 60 percent not 67 percent
• The Wrap is one word

Accolades

• The accolades table should include "scope="col"s in the columns

References

• Reference 3 is missing the publisher which should not be in the title
• The publisher of Reference 8 has a stray comma at the end
• Also the title in the same reference should not be italised
• The authors in Refs 9 and 12 should be linked
• Reference 11 is missing the work
• "Arizona International Film Festival : You Go to mMy Head"" - the colons should not be spaced out and there is an extra m in the text in bold
• Reference 18 is missing the date it was published

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 07:40, 9 October 2020 (UTC)

• MWright96, All done — except one. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 11:48, 9 October 2020 (UTC)
  • @CAPTAIN MEDUSA: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 12:44, 9 October 2020 (UTC)