Talk:You All Over Me/GA1

Latest comment: 2 years ago by VersaceSpace in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

Reviewer: VersaceSpace (talk · contribs) 16:51, 1 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

lead and infobox edit

  • "describes the narrators inability" → "describes the narrator's inability"
    • Done.
      • Actually done. (I somehow forgot to save the edits, sorry about that)
  • The song debuted atop Billboard Country Digital Songs and Country Streaming Songs charts" → "The song debuted atop the Billboard Country Digital Songs and Country Streaming Songs charts"
    • Done.
  • The lyric video has more than 6.8 million views now
    • Updated to 7 million views.
  • infobox looks good

background and release edit

  • some context should be given regarding the masters situation, including a mention and wikilink of Scooter Braun
    • Done.
      • It appears BawinV has an issue with the context I added; I'm not really sure what to do now because I have no experience with good article reviews. Where should this be discussed?

composition and lyrics edit

  • not sure why there's a comma next to "lilting" but that should be removed
    • Done.

critical reception edit

  • Good

commercial performance edit

  • Good

credits and personnel edit

  • Good

charts edit

  • Good

release history edit

  • Good

notes edit

  • Good

references edit

  • refs 5, 12, 16, 22, 24: un-wikilink billboard
    • This isn't really significant, but per MOS:OVERLINK, "Citations stand alone in their usage, so there is no problem with repeating the same link in many citations within an article".

comments edit

  On hold versacespaceleave a message! 09:49, 5 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

All concerns seem to have been addressed. I'll allow the Scooter Braun pointer to slide below since another editor had an issue with it. I'll  Pass this, thank you. versacespaceleave a message! 21:48, 10 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Oh wow, thank you! This is my first ever good article, and thanks again for passing it. Have a great day. PassedDown (talk | contribs)