Talk:Yo Nací Para Amarte/GA1

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Magiciandude in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:05, 21 February 2017 (UTC)Reply


Initial comments:

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  • The single cover image should have an "alt" parameter
  • Just a suggestion: "and was released as the fourth single" --> "and was released as the fourth and final single"
  • "which he admits goes beyond reason." --> I'm afraid this does not sound very encyclopedic to me; could this be simplified?
  • No music video? What a shame :(
  • If "goes beyond reason" is a better description and more correct (obviously you're the expert in this situation), then I would suggest keeping it in quotes up in the lead and ignore my previous suggestion
  • Also just a suggestion: "fourth single" --> "fourth and final single"
  • "It reached on top of the chart" --> "It reached the top of the chart"
  • "the song" --> "The song"
  • "launching" --> "launch"
  • Reference #1 – Link Billboard please
  • Reference #6 – Link Sony Music Mexico please
  • Reference #11 – Unlike Billboard please
ON HOLD – Ping me when you are done. Thank you, Carbrera (talk) 06:15, 9 March 2017 (UTC).Reply
@Carbrera: I finished the article. I took your second suggestion and added the quotation on the lead since it is a reviewer saying that. I also linked SME instead Sony Mexico because of an oversight on my part. And yes, it's a shame that there's no music video for the song. Erick (talk) 15:46, 9 March 2017 (UTC)Reply