Talk:Yellala Falls/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Typing General (talk · contribs) 08:41, 14 July 2013 (UTC)

Hello! This is my first review, but I've read the criteria and "Reviewing Good articles" page. I'll review the article in a short while.--Typing General (talk) 08:41, 14 July 2013 (UTC)

Introduction

Pass, summarizes the contents of the article.--Typing General (talk) 08:54, 14 July 2013 (UTC)

Location

Pass. Duplicate Detector shows no copyright violations and the content adequately summarizes the subject.--Typing General (talk) 08:54, 14 July 2013 (UTC)

First European discovery

The paragraph should briefly describe what a padrão is, namely that it was used to mark land claims.--Typing General (talk) 08:59, 14 July 2013 (UTC)

I have done so. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:34, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

Later European visitors and descriptions

A bit too many quotations in this segment. Some of the descriptions could be converted into original prose.--Typing General (talk) 18:28, 16 July 2013 (UTC)

Addressed. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 18:42, 16 July 2013 (UTC)

Ecological importance

Pass. Overall, it's a great article and was interesting to read. Once the issues have been fixed, I'll happily pass this as a Good Article.--Typing General (talk) 18:28, 16 July 2013 (UTC)

This article passes as a Good Article.--Typing General (talk) 05:24, 17 July 2013 (UTC)