Talk:Yazdegerd I/GA1

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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 15:25, 2 April 2020 (UTC)Reply


I will do this one as well since I will have time. NoahTalk 15:25, 2 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

  • " was Sasanian King of Kings of Iran" was a Sasanian...
I've seen different opinions of this, such as Kavad I where the spelling was accepted, it's kinda weird. I've added "a" though. --HistoryofIran (talk) 23:40, 2 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • "he succeeded his brother Bahram IV (r. 388–399) after Bahram's assassination." could this be rephrased to avoid using Bahram twice in just a few words?
Done. --HistoryofIran (talk) 23:42, 2 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • For the Etymology, you can delete the first citation since both sentences are cited from the same source
Done. --HistoryofIran (talk) 23:42, 2 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • Some of the images are missing alt text
Fixed. --HistoryofIran (talk) 23:51, 2 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • Could you please vary the sides on which images are placed?
Erh, not sure there is enough space for that without making it look kinda weird. --HistoryofIran (talk) 23:44, 2 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • "when the priestly leaders agreement to cooperate with the court" agreed?
Yup, fixed. --HistoryofIran (talk) 23:42, 2 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • "Yazdegerd I died in 420. According to 5th-century Armenian historian Movses Khorenatsi, Yazdegerd died of disease" Could these be combined?
Imho I don't think they should, I've changed it a little bit. --HistoryofIran (talk) 23:52, 2 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

That should be it. Another pretty good article! NoahTalk 23:23, 2 April 2020 (UTC)Reply