Talk:Yakima Valley riots

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Smc083

Peer Review by Sydney Culver

Background and what led up edit
  • Really good
  • like the links to other pages
  • information is well sourced in this paragraph
What happened? edit
  • says in November 1927, is there an exact start date?
  • "those who chose to stayed were", change "stayed" to "stay"
  • "were told they would hang if found after dark", change "hang" to "would be hung"
  • well sourced
  • pretty good information
Results and outcome edit
  • multiple sources
  • says ended November 11th do we have a start date?

Overall pretty good doesn't seem biased information and sources are cited frequently The first source says "Login in Sam Houston State University" and someone has to login in to see the source is there another way to cite it to get around logging in for those who don't have a sam account? Good job though! Smc083 (talk) 18:35, 26 March 2019 (UTC) Sydney CulverReply