Talk:Yagoona, New South Wales
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Page move
editThis page was moved from "Yagoona" to "Yagoona, New South Wales" as per the naming convention set out at Wikipedia:Naming conventions (places) -- Ianblair23 13:28, 18 August 2005 (UTC)
Overhaul
editOk I've done a huge overhaul to this article, new headings, more info, pics (i'll get another pic of Yagoona town centre when I can :-) ), referencing, etc. Comments greatly appreciated =)Hectic18 06:50, 19 April 2007 (UTC)
Cheers VS. This is the first article I've ever made significant contributions to, really appreciate the input and pointers VirtualSteve =)
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editThe comment(s) below were originally left at Talk:Yagoona, New South Wales/Comments, and are posted here for posterity. Following several discussions in past years, these subpages are now deprecated. The comments may be irrelevant or outdated; if so, please feel free to remove this section.
Generally this article is well on its way to the next level but it suffers from two main issues. One the language is at times non-encyclopaedic, and two, the chronological order is not well established. For example (covering both issues) there are two very short sentences in the history section. One relates to history of up 40,000 years ago and the next to when the McDonalds restaurant opened. Both are probably important (given context) but they both need to be expanded and then cut and paste into different sections. Articles like Wagga Wagga will give you a good idea of what a B article looks like, plus show where sequenced history belongs. Best wishes. Please let me know directly on my talk page when you are ready for another assessment.--VS talk 14:01, 22 April 2007 (UTC) |
Last edited at 14:01, 22 April 2007 (UTC). Substituted at 11:00, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
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