Talk:Woollen Gymnasium/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Hog Farm in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 22:29, 14 May 2020 (UTC)
Criteria edit
1. Prose ✓ Pass
2. Verifiability ✓ Pass
3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass
4. Neutral ✓ Pass
5. Stable ✓ Pass
6. Illustrations ✓ Pass
7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass
Comments edit
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- This is really nitpicky, so this is optional, but for stuff like "twenty–six seasons", MOS:HYPHEN would suggest a hyphen, not an endash. MOS:DASH isn't really a GA-thing, so I'm not going to require dash fixes, except for a few special cases involving reference formatting.
- "fund-raise" is one word usually, with no hyphen
- Link fencing
- "elected to build (the Tin Can) in 1923" - Are the paranthesis really necessary?
- Go ahead and link President Roosevelt, since there were two of them, and non-American readers may not know the chronology enough to know which one is referred to. You can then remove the link to FDR in the next section
- For the dimensions, can the {{convert}} template be added with meters?
- "The main gym floor will gave room for two varsity basketball courts" - Remove "will"
- Link limestone
- "School president Frank Porter Graham" - I'm not sure that School should be capitalized in this usage.
- "As of the conclusion of the 2019–20, Woollen" - I think you're missing the word season in here.
- Link Habitat for Humanity
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- Create a further reading section and move Powell there, he's not used as a ref.
- In the short refs, you have a Wade 1962, but in the long refs, there's a Wade 1961 but not Wade 1962. Which date is correct?
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- In the infobox, you state that is was renovated in 2004 and 2010, but the 2010 renovation isn't mentioned in the article.
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- Addressed everything but the 2010 renovation. Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:07, 16 May 2020 (UTC)