Talk:Wooden bicycle

Latest comment: 10 years ago by AndrewDressel in topic Recent edits

Recent edits edit

Recent edits have greatly improved the article, but violate several parts of the wikipedia manual of style

  • There is no reason that wooden or bicycle are capitalized.
  • There should be a lede image. The version of the article before recent changes included three representative images: an old bike, a new bike, and a kids bike; all made of wood.

Other issues include

  • The new history section is more about bicycles at all than wooden bicycles. That content belongs in the history of bicycles article.
  • The new lede focuses on construction techniques for modern, western retail, at the expense of historical and global construction techniques.

Therefore, I have tried to preserve the best of both versions. Please discuss issues here instead of simply reverting. -AndrewDressel (talk) 15:48, 24 November 2013 (UTC)Reply