Talk:Wooden Spoon Society

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Cyberbot II in topic External links modified

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I am going to add an advert template to this article, because it clearly isn't written from a neutral point of view. At the very least, words and phrases like the following need to be removed:

"dedicated to" (repeated)
"harnessing the spirit and values of rugby"
"notable recent projects"
"sporting legends"
"time and energy"
"strong relationships"
"Grand Slam Hero"
"voice of sport"

Additionally, the Founding section should be incorporated into the rest of the article in a more formal style - avoid "the charity was born...", for example. The same applies to the Management section, though I can see little in the way of significant information there. It contains the most blatant example of the non-neutral point of view, I think: "Spoon is pleased to announce"!

I am hesitant to make all these changes myself, as I really have no previous knowledge of the charity and no expertise on the subjects at hand. I may return to make them myself when I have more time on my hands, however, if nobody else does. - Estesark (talk) 21:18, 18 March 2012 (UTC)Reply

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