Talk:Wonder World Tour/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Ipodnano05 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 01:12, 5 March 2011 (UTC)Reply


Well, this looks like another excellent article, but I'm sure I can find something to criticise. ;)


  • Quotes need a ref right after them, not just at the end of the sentence/paragraph, for example:
    • "more of a mature show" (in development)
  •   Done
    • "Normally, in a rock show you don’t need someone calling the show. In this one we had to take a more theatrical approach with someone calling cues every step of the way because there was so much going on at once between props and automation" (towards the end of development)
  • Can you find a more original way of ending a quote than "Cyrus said"?
  • Ditto London and, unless qualified, London refers to the city in England
  • Don't put quote marks round a blockquote per MOS:QUOTE
  •   Done
  • Punctuation should go after quote marks per MOS:PUNCT (for example, "Breakout." at the start of Concert synopsis)
  •   Done

Since GA doesn't require absolute MoS compliance, I'm happy to pass this, but the above should probably be looked at when you get a chance. Excellent work. :) HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 01:52, 5 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

Thanks :) -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 23:24, 5 March 2011 (UTC)Reply