Talk:Wolfgang Harich

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Auntieruth55 in topic good start

good start

edit

Good start and very good for finding your own topic. :)

  • Some questions: what is Besseres Deutschland?
  • the sentence about having a heart attack but "surviving" until ... that needs some work. It could seem as if he was laid up in the hospital, or sick, the whole time.
  • Where are your sources and footnotes? (basically, where did you get your information?)
  • This needs a thorough edit to be in your own words. Auntieruth55 (talk) 17:46, 29 March 2010 (UTC)Reply