Talk:Wisconsin dairy industry/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 17:51, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 17:51, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

• Images are free to use.
• "ageing" → "aging" (American English)
• "later half" → "latter half" (both uses)
• Remove the comma after "the farms".
• Remove the comma after "the railroad" (unnecessary).
• Remove the comma after "switched to dairy farming" (near the end of sentence).
• "to higher" → "to a higher"
• "products has" → "products have"
• Remove the comma after "2000".
• "Wisconsin have" → "Wisconsin has"
• Archive sources (either manually or with this tool).
• Also, don't try to have website links (ex. "www." and ".org") present in the "|website=" parameter (find the actual name of the source instead).

• @Some Dude From North Carolina:, I fixed what you recommended. JackFromReedsburg (talk | contribs) 20:21, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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