Talk:Wipeout Pure/GA1
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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 18:30, 29 May 2016 (UTC)
Hello, User:Jaguar, I will be reviewing the article since I'm a bit "Wiki-bored" (I blame Allen Walker's article). It is pretty well-written for a GA but I'm having some doubts.
- In the lead "Critics unanimously praised the graphics, track designs and general aesthetics, however some critics noticed occasional framerate fluctuations." The word "critics" feel a bit overused and the sentence too long. I would suggest splitting into "However," or "On the other hand.
- Can the downloadable content be explained in the gameplay section?
- Lastly, I think the project no longer uses GameRankings as it is kinda the same stuff as Metacritic.
Anyway, good work in the article as usual.Tintor2 (talk) 18:30, 29 May 2016 (UTC)
Hey Tintor2, thanks for checking this over! For the first point, I've removed the first "critics" and replaced it with "reviewers", while removing the second "critics" from that sentence. For the second point, I've added the fact that downloadable content includes new ships, tracks and music. Lastly, I've removed GameRankings from the article. I never read into that discussion and to this day I'm not sure when to use it or not to use it. Thanks for the review! Please let me know if you have anything else. JAGUAR 19:01, 29 May 2016 (UTC)