Talk:Winghead shark/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 17:31, 24 May 2013 (UTC)

Happy to offer some thoughts. J Milburn (talk) 17:31, 24 May 2013 (UTC)

• "This species inhabits shallow waters close to shore" How shallow are we talking?

Surprisingly, none of the many sources I have give this, which leads me to believe it hasn't been quantified.

• "Pregnant females have been reported to quarrel with each other.[4]" Why? What does this entail? Is this unusual? (I'm just trying to get an idea of its significance.)

I'd like to know more about it too, but this is the only information given in the source.

• "Sexual maturity is reached at around 1.0–1.1 m (3.3–3.6 ft) long for males and 1.1–1.2 m (3.6–3.9 ft) long for females." What sort of age is this? Do we know?

This is not stated anywhere that I know of.

• "Its meat, fins" Perhaps we could have a little about how the meat/fins are used?

Sentence expanded.

Generally very strong, as ever. I made a few tweaks. Sourcing and images seem solid. J Milburn (talk) 17:56, 24 May 2013 (UTC)

Let me know of further issues. -- Yzx (talk) 01:59, 25 May 2013 (UTC)

Great, happy to promote. Certainly a review on the shorter side, but I'm happy that this is ready. J Milburn (talk) 10:41, 26 May 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. -- Yzx (talk) 17:22, 26 May 2013 (UTC)