Talk:William Hodgson (RAF officer)

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Djmaschek in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 05:06, 20 December 2021 (UTC)Reply


Initial comment

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I plan to review this article. Djmaschek (talk) 05:06, 20 December 2021 (UTC)Reply

Review 1

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@Zawed: Sorry, I got distracted for a few days. Normally, I find numerous errors, but your grammar and syntax are excellent. There is only one issue to fix for GA class. Djmaschek (talk) 19:15, 26 December 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • In the London Gazette quote, it reads, "and damaged a Heinkel in." Shouldn't this read, "and damaged a Heinkel 111"? If this typo was in the original article, you might want to add "[sic]". Otherwise, please fix.