Talk:Wilfred Talbot Smith/GA1

Latest comment: 10 years ago by J Milburn in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 19:49, 10 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

I really enjoyed reviewing the article on Montalban, so I'm happy to offer some thoughts here. J Milburn (talk) 19:49, 10 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

Onto the prose:

This is very strong- my only major worry comes from the fact that there are some pretty sensational claims sourced to a not-completely-academic work. J Milburn (talk) 21:04, 10 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

Second read-through

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Just a few more comments:

Looking very strong; I do think it'll be ready for GA status very soon. After that, perhaps try to find someone to smooth out the prose a little further and you'll be ready for FAC (though be ready to defend the reliability of the Starr book). J Milburn (talk) 20:17, 18 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

Ok, I'm now happy that this is ready for GA status. A bit more work is required before FAC; I'd work to define/link any jargon, and a fresh pair of eyes to give a thorough copyedit would be good. I know you're already looking into a legacy section, which would be an excellent addition. In any case, great work so far, and I do hope to see this at FAC in the future! J Milburn (talk) 12:09, 21 December 2013 (UTC)Reply