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I will be reviewing this article. Comments will be within the next few hours. —Michael Jester (talk·contribs) 10:43, 6 December 2012 (UTC)Reply
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Per WP:LINKSTYLE, "When possible, avoid placing links next to each other so that they look like a single link". Not sure if you can work around it, but see if you can.
Not necessarily a concern for this review, but is there a better picture out there that shows more of the roller coaster? The one in the infobox just shows (what I'm guessing) a small part of the ride.
Not at this stage. A search for pictures with relevant licensing has returned no results. Themeparkgc Talk 23:49, 7 December 2012 (UTC)Reply
That's fine. Just keep a heads up for one if you plan to take this to FA. —Michael Jester (talk·contribs) 07:43, 8 December 2012 (UTC)Reply
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"Speculation of Wild Eagle began" -> "Speculation of Wild Eagle began"
"On October 7, 2011, the lift hill was completed and by the end of October 2011, the track layout was complete." -> "On October 7, 2011, the lift hill was completed, and by the end of October 2011, the track layout was complete."
I understand most of the words here, but for someone without roller coaster knowledge it may be tough. I know it may be difficult, but can you explain what a zero-g roll is in the text? Also, it's called a zero-gravity roll, per its article page.
"Because the seats are located either on the left or right of the track, a fake eagle is placed on top of each car to add to the theme of the roller coaster." unsourced
Done I reworded the sentence slightly so it could be sourced. Themeparkgc Talk 01:03, 8 December 2012 (UTC)Reply
Partly done Fixed 3/4 of the links with archives. Themeparkgc Talk 00:38, 8 December 2012 (UTC)Reply
Okay. That's fine. If you wish to take the article to FA, this would need to be replaced. —Michael Jester (talk·contribs) 07:43, 8 December 2012 (UTC)Reply
Nothing (as far as I can see). I am trying to find a replacement source. If I can't I'll just end up removing that sentence. Themeparkgc Talk 01:03, 8 December 2012 (UTC)Reply
For #8, not sure how reliable facebook is, but it's the track's official page, so I can understand. However, the photos don't have a date, so I can't back up the claims.
If you move your mouse over the line that says "Updated over a year ago" you will be given a date of 7 October 2011. This matches the dates on the individual photos if you click on them. Is this enough? Themeparkgc Talk 00:53, 8 December 2012 (UTC)Reply
Good work on the article thus far. Once these comments are addressed, I will re-evaluate the article and see where it goes from there. I have this page bookmarked, but if you need to contact me, ping my talk page. —Michael Jester (talk·contribs) 11:10, 6 December 2012 (UTC)Reply
I have resolved the majority of the issues identified above. There are just two points still pending (dates on Facebook and Coaster101). Themeparkgc Talk 01:03, 8 December 2012 (UTC)Reply
Great work. Once these final comments are addressed, I'll pass the article. —Michael Jester (talk·contribs) 07:43, 8 December 2012 (UTC)Reply
I believe I have addressed all the comments. Themeparkgc Talk 01:16, 9 December 2012 (UTC)Reply