Talk:White-headed fruit dove

Latest comment: 2 years ago by AryKun in topic GA Review
Featured articleWhite-headed fruit dove is a featured article; it (or a previous version of it) has been identified as one of the best articles produced by the Wikipedia community. Even so, if you can update or improve it, please do so.
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DateProcessResult
January 31, 2022Good article nomineeListed
April 15, 2022Featured article candidatePromoted
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on February 5, 2022.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the white-headed fruit dove (Ptilinopus eugeniae) was named after Eugénie de Montijo, Empress of the French?
Current status: Featured article

Did you know nomination edit

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 23:27, 30 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

5x expanded by AryKun (talk). Self-nominated at 11:46, 23 January 2022 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Super easy pass, this article is in great shape and fulfills all the criteria easily. AryKun, the image used in the article is vibrant; would you be interested in including it in the nomination? —⁠Collint c 05:02, 24 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

I'm not super eager since it's an illustration, but you could add it if you want. AryKun (talk) 05:13, 24 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
Eh! If you're not into it, that's just fine. This is good to go. —⁠Collint c 05:37, 24 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:White-headed fruit dove/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 09:20, 29 January 2022 (UTC)Reply


Hi again!

  • specific name – link; I also would repeat "eugeniae" to make immediately clear what the term is referring to.
Done.
  • Other names for the species include Eugenie's fruit dove. – "Another name for the species is" because it is only a single one?
Done.
  • Southeast Asia and Oceania – why link Southeast Asia but not Oceania?
Added link.
  • sister – link at first mention
Done.
  • subspecies –link?
Done.
  • Optional: the taxonomy section is very technical, and you would help readers to explain the terms most central for understanding in a gloss (brackets). E.g. "conspecifics (of the same species)"
Added glosses
  • also link taxonomy?
Done.
  • The image seems to be historical; include caption with author & year?
Done.
  • the second note is a longer (around 0.5 seconds long) and more emphasised. – a longer what?
Removed "a".
  • Ref #3 lacks title and author.
Added author, but there isn't really a title beyond that for the book, since the section in which the species is described doesn't have its own title.
This seems to be a journal, and your current title is in fact the name of the journal, and "Zoological Society of London" is the publisher of the journal. Since it is a journal, you should use the "cite journal" template rather than the "cite book" template. According to the table of contents, the title of the paper within the journal (i.e., your cite) is "On some Birds collected by Mr. John MacGillivray, the Naturalist attached to H. M. Surveying Ship Rattlesnake, and lately sent home by Capt. Denham, the Commander of the Expedition". --Jens Lallensack (talk) 20:57, 30 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
Okay, done. AryKun (talk) 05:17, 31 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for reviewing, I think I've addressed all of your concerns. AryKun (talk) 13:30, 30 January 2022 (UTC)Reply