Talk:Where no man has gone before

Latest comment: 1 year ago by 2601:380:8000:311A:1908:E7D7:31EB:487B in topic Star Trek (2009)- "go boldly"?
Former good articleWhere no man has gone before was one of the Social sciences and society good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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Star Trek (2009)- "go boldly"?

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I just saw the latest film, and did they change the grammatically challenged "boldly go" to "go boldly" in the opening? I thought that's what I heard, but I'm not sure.

Rewriting the past to be politically correct gender neutral is ridiculous. First off they aren't going to empty space where "no one" has gone before
Are the aliens they encounter "no one"? "Man" in this context is not gender specific. 2601:380:8000:311A:1908:E7D7:31EB:487B (talk) 08:28, 24 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

Good Article Nomination History

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Here's the good article criteria:

1. Well written?: If you're a Trekkie, it's delightful. Still good if it's not.
2. Factually accurate?: Aggressively footnoted.
3. Broad in coverage?: Wow. Had no idea this quote had such legs.
4. Neutral point of view?: Ok.
5. Stability?: Ok.
6. Images?: Fair use of screenshot ok.

I think it's a good article. Congrat's! — Kghusker 12:39, 2 February 2007 (UTC)Reply

Pedantry rides again

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From the introduction:

"The Star Trek character Zefram Cochrane, who was the first to fly at warp speed, supposedly originated the phrase in a speech which described what humans could do with this new warp technology. He utters the phrase in the first episode of the Trek prequel series Star Trek: Enterprise."

(Emphasis added.)

Would it not be better to say, "who was the first human to fly at warp speed"? --Chris 21:03, 13 July 2006 (UTC)Reply

Yes indeed! As everyone knows, the Vulcans landed because they detected Cochrane's warp signature. 🖖 – AndyFielding (talk) 07:57, 4 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

The "Fiction" tag

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The tag is currently there because the section "doesn't give the real history within the show". What does that mean, exactly? -- Ritchy 03:16, 23 August 2006 (UTC)Reply

I see the problem as being that the description of the backstory does not adequately describe what is fiction. A wikipedia article should be written entirely from a factual perspective. I have tried cleaning it up to avoid the in-universe persepective.
Apparently the title "outside the series" was supposed to suggest "outside the in-universe perspective." Since a Wikipedia article should always be factual, I changed this to just ""History." I am still not thrilled with that title, but I think it best represents what a Wikipedia reader should expect -- history is the factual history and nothing else.
--RichardMathews 19:01, 4 September 2006 (UTC)Reply

rest of quote

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Would the origin of the rest of the opening narration be on-topic for this page? There are a number of memos regarding its creation flying around in August 1966 (some of the interim versions were, um, interesting). Was amused to see : "Space: Endless. Silent. Waiting", one of the proposals, pops up in Starship Exeter's narraton. Morwen - Talk 08:02, 13 December 2006 (UTC)Reply

Sure. I mean, we already discuss the in-universe history of the complete narration. Its real-world history would be a great addition! Provided of course it has references ;) -- Ritchy 15:40, 13 December 2006 (UTC)Reply

At a Star Trek convention in 1977 an uncut version of "Where No Man Has Gone Before" was presented. This episode originally included a much longer version of the quote, read by Shatner. Is anyone familiar with this longer quotation? It surely deserves mention in this discussion.67.208.101.74 (talk) 19:51, 14 May 2010 (UTC)JohnBReply

Order of the page

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This quote is from Star Trek, and this page is mostly important in a Star Trek context. Given this, shouldn't the section explaining the quote in Star Trek come first? I mean, the origins of the quote are of course important, but most people will want to learn why the quote is so commonly used today (i.e. the Star Trek stuff) before knowing where it originated from. -- Ritchy 19:17, 20 December 2006 (UTC)Reply

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As per the manual of style, I rewrote the trivia list of that section into a coherent text, and added references. I had to cut some of the trivia that didn't fit in the text. Here it is:

  • The pilot episode of Futurama, "Space Pilot 3000", begins with a parody of Star Trek's title sequence. It opens with a shot of a spaceship flying through space while the opening notes of the Star Trek theme play, and the character Fry then narrates "Space, it seems to go on and on forever..."
  • In the Babylon 5 episode "Voices of Authority", the character of Ivanova told Sheridan, who was about to have a sexual adventure with his political officer, "I think you're about to go where everyone has gone before".
  • The character of Garth says the line in the movie Wayne's World.

-- Ritchy 19:36, 10 January 2007 (UTC)Reply

The quote has also been used as a reference in 20th century christianity. There was a book in the late 1980's called "To Boldly Go" by evangelist Eric Delve. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 184.36.180.185 (talk) 04:53, 24 February 2013 (UTC)Reply

World of Warcraft
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The video game World of Warcraft, more precisely the progress dialogue of the Quest named You're Hired! added in 2007, includes a reference to the Star Trek quotation.

"Exploiting strange new worlds? Seeking out new technology and business opportunities? Boldly going where no goblin has gone before?"

Click the javascript disclosure named "Progress" on that Wowhead webpage to see this quote in its context.
Presenting this here because I feel I better shouldn't just add it to the article without further inquiry, as mentioning World of Warcraft in every other article (exaggeratingly speaking) may seem unsuitable or undesirable to some people.
--Harl (talk) 13:31, 17 March 2014 (UTC)Reply


Also:

  • "To boldly go where no green man has gone before" (description to a technology in Kerbal Space Program)
  • "To seek out new life, and J. K. Rowling!" (http://hpmor.com/chapter/25)

--Fedorkov Dmitry (talk) 02:20, 22 February 2015 (UTC)Reply

Cleanup may be needed

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As discussed at WP:IPC, when discussing "in popular culture" style information, citations should be included that not only confirm the existence of the reference but establish that it is considered significant in some manner. I think this section probably needs to be reviewed to confirm that the sources are in fact establishing the significance of the occurrences.

Put another way, if the tree falls in the woods but nobody hears it, it shouldn't be discussed in this section. DonIago (talk) 12:37, 18 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

Parody

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A skit titled "Booze Trek" ran at least once on the Dr. Demento Show. Here's a transcript, with plenty of typos. http://www.tealdragon.net/humor/startrek/booze.htm "Booze, the wino frontier. These are the voyagers of the barship Bourbonprize. Its five-beer mission: To explore strange new clubs, to seek out new girls and new habitizations...to boldly go where no lush has gone before." —Preceding unsigned comment added by Bizzybody (talkcontribs) 07:35, 20 January 2008 (UTC)Reply

Memory Alpha references

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In the article, footnotes 4, 5, 6, and 7 are split into two lines, the first containing nothing but the "^" symbol, and the second line containing the rest of the reference, but beginning with a square. This is wrong. I suspect that the problem lies in the Wiki programming somewhere. There appears to be a subroutine for references to Memory Alpha articles, and it appears that that's where the error lies. Can someone check it and fix it? Thanks. --Keeves (talk) 02:30, 28 January 2008 (UTC)Reply

Origin of the phrase prior to Star Trek

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This may be original research, but, I have found at least one usage of a similar phrase in a story published prior to Star Trek and the White House document. In H. P. Lovecraft's novella, The Dream-Quest of Unknown Kadath [1] this passage is found: "At length, sick with longing for those glittering sunset streets and cryptical hill lanes among ancient tiled roofs, nor able sleeping or waking to drive them from his mind, Carter resolved to go with bold entreaty whither no man had gone before, and dare the icy deserts through the dark to where unknown Kadath, veiled in cloud and crowned with unimagined stars, holds secret and nocturnal the onyx castle of the Great Ones." Does anyone think this should be included? Orville Eastland (talk) 03:25, 29 January 2008 (UTC)Reply

Wow! At first, I only saw the "no man had gone before", but your quote has the "go" and "bold", too! My opinion is that this should be allowed under the No Original Research rules. No Original Research does not refer to the method by which you found this quote. It refer to conclusions which are drawn from documented sources. If you would claim that this was the inspiration for the Star Trek phrase, and your source was that you heard it from Roddenberry personally, that would be Original Research. But if you simply say "I found this phrase in a really old book", that's okay. --Keeves (talk) 13:27, 29 January 2008 (UTC)Reply
Given that the "origin of the quote" outside the TV series and any link with its use in the series appears to be speculation (unless Peeples gives a source), shouldn't this section header be renamed as something not quite so specific? Mighty Antar (talk) 23:53, 5 August 2008 (UTC)Reply
It is not a given that it is speculation. As of July 20, 2008, the book itself was cited. That is use of a primary source, NOT original research. It is cited for 1) that a passage is in the book, and 2) publication date. No interpretation is being made. NOR does not require us to be blind to what is in front of our faces. IMHO (talk) 08:07, 14 November 2008 (UTC)Reply
I'm not sure which cite you are referring to. What I'm saying is that unless Peeples (who introduced the phrase to the series) states somewhere in something that we can cite, that he lifted the phrase from the Introduction to Outer Space leaflet rather than that he invented it, we are talking about a coincidence. The TSR article is simply a suggestion for an "origin of the quote" and does not provide anything beyond speculation. On the basis of that article, you can't state that the leaflet is the origin of the quote, only that it might be. This may seem like splitting hairs, but in the context of this article about the quote, in a section defining the 'origin of the quote' accuracy is critical.Mighty Antar (talk) 12:49, 14 November 2008 (UTC)Reply

The refimprove parameter in the multiple issues template

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Howdy all. Recently I removed the "refimprove" parameter from the {{Multiple issues}} template in this article. In my opinion, the number of citations that were in the article did not warrant having that parameter in the template. I was reverted and notified. I think that the article would benefit from more cited references, but I don't think the parameter is necessarily needed. What are other people's thoughts on the matter?--Rockfang (talk) 23:51, 4 January 2012 (UTC)Reply

After a cursory inspection, while the article does have multiple issues, the only problem I saw with citations was an unreferenced quotation. I would not contest removal of the refimprove parameter, though that quotation needs to either be sourced or removed. It's the alternate form of the spiel by...Black, I think? Doniago (talk) 14:14, 5 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
I believe I have removed the content you were referring to. I have also removed the parameter.--Rockfang (talk) 18:11, 12 January 2012 (UTC)Reply

List

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Does this article really need an exhaustive list of every time this phrase shows up in the franchise? I think not, but figured I'd pose the question here before I remove and summarize it. --EEMIV (talk) 14:56, 14 January 2014 (UTC)Reply

As with all cases of popular culture listcruft, my recommendation is to limit such incidents to those for which third-party sourcing establishing that the occurrence was considered significant in some manner can be provided. DonIago (talk) 15:22, 14 January 2014 (UTC)Reply
OPPOSE I can't see a valid reason to delete so many editors' contributions. This article needs those information to be informative. I've reverted the article to its original version pending a community consensus in the talk page. 125.168.97.231 (talk) 02:15, 23 January 2014 (UTC)Reply
Wikipedia articles should not contain indiscriminate lists. This is also discussed at WP:IPC. If you'd like to propose some criteria for inclusion we can do that, but if not then I will stick with my original recommendation that all entries lacking third-party sourcing establishing their significance be removed. DonIago (talk) 13:52, 23 January 2014 (UTC)Reply
Agreed. Additionally, "so many editors" have contributed much to many other articles that were thoroughly culled, rewritten, or even deleted; lots of prior work, even well-intentioned, isn't sufficient reason to retain content. Additionally, "it's informative" doesn't hold muster as a reason to retain a poor article, let alone poor sections of an article. --EEMIV (talk) 16:03, 23 January 2014 (UTC)Reply
CONCUR with removal/summarization. -P shadoh (talk) 18:51, 23 January 2014 (UTC)Reply
CONCUR with removal. You wouldn't expect an article to list everytime Spock said "fascinating" would you? Miyagawa (talk) 13:12, 24 January 2014 (UTC)Reply
I think that would be a fascinating article! Not really. Also, we seem to have a reasonable consensus at this point, so   Done. DonIago (talk) 14:08, 24 January 2014 (UTC)Reply
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Curiously, Eric Partridge in his Usage and Abusage, when discussing the split infinitive, wrote; "Avoid the split infinitive wherever possible; but if it is the clearest and the most natural construction, use it boldly. The angels are on our side."[1] It is not known whether Partridge used the words "boldly" and "angels" as a oblique reference to Star Trek but it is unlikey, Usage and Abusage was first published in 1947, well before Star Trek was even a twinkling.

  1. ^ Partridge, Eric (1979). Usage and Abusage. Hazel Watson & Viney Ltd, Aylesbury Bucks. p. 296.

Jodosma (talk) 20:33, 9 January 2015 (UTC)Reply

And this is relevant because…? – AndyFielding (talk) 08:02, 4 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

To include or not to include? (Terry Pratchett parody reference)

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I have now added, twice, and Doniago has now reverted, twice, the following cross-reference to Terry Pratchett's take on this quote. Rather than continue the reversion war, I'm putting the section here for discussion.

Terry Pratchett parodied the phrase in the opening lines of his Discworld novel Moving Pictures: "This is space. It's sometimes called the final frontier. (Except that of course you can't have a final frontier, because there'd be nothing for it to be a frontier to, but as frontiers go, it's pretty penultimate . . ."[1]

I would posit that a clever reconstruction by a critically acclaimed author of several dozen bestselling novels is at least as worth including as, say, the clumsy reference on the cover of a 1987 PC game (which, incidentally, sounds like a Planetfall ripoff). In fact, I would put it in the same light as the Douglas Adams play on split infinitives, and I think the two complement each other. Doniago's position (and I invite you to elaborate) is that this is just an example of WP:OSE.

Penny for y'all's thoughts. Hzoi (talk) 14:41, 18 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

FWIW I did mention this (granted, in less specific detail) up above as a new section under "Cleanup may be needed". But since we're here, my primary concern is that the link you provided serves as an instance of the quote being used, but does not establish that anyone considered this particular usage of the quote significant in any manner. I would be much happier with an independent reference that makes note of Pratchett's usage of the quote. Put another way, I see that the tree fell in the woods, but I don't see any suggestion that it made a sound when it fell.
My pointing out of OSE was only to note, as I pointed out in the section I added, that I believe the "clumsy reference" you noted as well as others in this section should perhaps be reexamined as well. That there may be a clumsy reference already in the article should not be used as a justification to add more references without significance, clumsy or otherwise. DonIago (talk) 15:14, 18 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
I hadn't seen it before putting in this new section. Either way, no one else seems concerned, so I'm moving on. Hzoi (talk) 16:36, 1 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

References

  1. ^ Pratchett, Terry (1990). Moving Pictures. Victor Gollancz Ltd. ISBN 978-0-06-102063-6.

Colon versus semi colon

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My understanding, grammatically speaking, is that colons should be followed by capitals. There for it should be either Space; the final frontier. Or Space: The final frontier. RBJ (talk) 16:08, 17 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

You're wrong about a colon being followed by capitals. I both Googled the phrase and reviewed MOS:COLON. There is some disagreement as to the exact formulation of the quote though, FWIW. DonIago (talk) 16:37, 17 October 2021 (UTC)Reply
Oh goody, I'm glad this came up somewhere. Text after a colon starts with a capital when the text is a complete sentence. When it's not a complete sentence (and you may need to know a bit of grammar for that, if intuition doesn't serve), it's not capitalized. This is pretty standard. Cheers! – AndyFielding (talk) 08:01, 4 June 2022 (UTC)Reply