Talk:When She Loved Me/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Courcelles in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 17:00, 24 April 2018 (UTC)Reply


  • "in Vancouver, British Colombia" Columbia. Like South Carolina, not South America.
  • "The Singer's Musical Theatre Anthology - Teen's Edition: Tenor Book Only, " Book Only is a way the book is sold, not a part of the title.
  • We could do without the "reviews" by Amazon, CD Universe, and Barnes and Noble. Stick to people who aren't trying to sell the reader something.
  • "inger-songwriter Elvis Costello identified "When She Loved Me" as a song that continues to make him whenever he hears it" Make him... what?

Good work, all I could find to nit-pick. Courcelles (talk) 17:35, 24 April 2018 (UTC)Reply