Talk:Whammy! The All-New Press Your Luck/GA1

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Carbrera in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:44, 19 May 2017 (UTC)Reply


Initial comments

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  • In the infobox, I don't think you need to include ", California" after "Hollywood" – it's a pretty well known location
  • In the lead, I'd suggest adding "in Hollywood" after "The series was taped at Tribune Studios"
  • In all cases: should the 'w' in "whammy" always be capitalized? I think it should since I believe it is a proper noun.
  • "in season two it was changed o" --> "in season two it was changed to"
ON HOLD – your prose is absolutely excellent. It's no wonder you have so many featured articles! Please ping me with questions and when you have glanced over my suggestions. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 04:54, 21 May 2017 (UTC).Reply
Thanks for the kind words! I believe all has been amended here. Thanks again for the review, --Bcschneider53 (talk) 12:02, 21 May 2017 (UTC)Reply
Of course! This happens to be one of my favorite game shows! I'm glad to see what you have done to it in order to improve it! Great work! Carbrera (talk) 23:33, 21 May 2017 (UTC).Reply