Talk:West Crater/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 07:10, 9 June 2018 (UTC)

• Intrusive rock is wikilinked twice in the body
• Quaternary is wikilinked, but not at the first instance
• "the flows have just started to be eroded by local streams" - maybe not such a big issue for the lead, but can we get a date or time period (like, 'within the last several years') in the body as per WP:REALTIME?

• I don't think the source clarifies. I tweaked to "they are being eroded". ceranthor 14:37, 9 June 2018 (UTC)

• "The eastern flow has at least ten subunits" - I'm not sure what this means; can you clarify?

• Pretty sure the source just means that there are slightly different compositional subunits. ceranthor 14:37, 9 June 2018 (UTC)

• The second reference ("West Crater". Global Volcanism Program) is redirecting me to a blank webpage. Incidentally I went to that page to see if any further detail could be given about how much of the human population would be in danger if the volcano did erupt. By that I mean, its all well and good to say '2 million people live within 62 miles' of the volcano, but for the reader who doesn't know anything about volcano eruptions, what are the implications for that? Can a volcano eruption kill people 62 miles away? I honestly don't know.

• Link fixed. I can't say without original research whether 62 miles would be reasonable to kill people, though I'm sure it's happened at some point in human history. ceranthor 14:37, 9 June 2018 (UTC)

Looks really good overall. Placing on hold until issues are addressed. Freikorp (talk) 07:10, 9 June 2018 (UTC)

@Freikorp: Think these should be fixed except the ones I replied to. ceranthor 14:37, 9 June 2018 (UTC)

Happy to pass this now. Congrats. :) Freikorp (talk) 00:14, 10 June 2018 (UTC)