Talk:Wedge-capped capuchin
Wedge-capped capuchin was nominated as a Natural sciences good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (November 28, 2012). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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Edits, September 2013
editFollowing up on the work last year, students from Washington University in St. Louis have been editing this page in the past week to attempt to bring the page to "Good Article" status. We have been trying to go off the GA review comments, and have expanded the intro, written a section on phylogeny, added a photo, and written a bit about the animals' ecology (outside of behavior) and conservation. See the banner at the top for information pertaining to last year's course, as well as this year's course. Gharris7 (talk) 22:13, 26 September 2013 (UTC)GHarris7
Intro
editI have read over the entire wiki entry and attempted to make a succinct summary of the main points of the article to function as a lead section. Srowitz —Preceding undated comment added 02:15, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
Infanticide
editIn an effort to bring this page to the "Good Article" status, I added a section on "Infanticide." Not only is this topic interesting, but I also hoped that it would help flesh-out the "Behavior" heading. This update was done as an assignment (see above), and any input that you may have for my update, as well as future updates to this page, is greatly appreciated. Thanks! Jdhale (talk) 01:37, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
Food Washing and Conservation Status
editIn order to improve the quality of this article, I added a section on food washing in wedge capped capuchins and a section on its conservation status. This was done as an assignment for behavioral ecology at wustl. kaijones5245 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 04:16, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
Comments
editPeer Review
editI looked over the Social Interaction section. This article is well-written. I made few to no grammatical corrections. I did add quite a few links. The topics are interesting and your additions are informative and understandable. Great job! WhitleyTucker (talk) 09:17, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
Peer Review
editThe social interaction and the group demographics sections are really strong in this article. I made a few minor grammatical edits and added in a few links, but overall it was very clear and thorough. This article would benefit from an additional behavior section about the weeper capuchin's breeding. Additionally, a more general description of the weeper capuchins is needed. Great contributions! Samara levine (talk) 19:50, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
Overall, a very impressive addition to the entry. It seems like you really did your research into this species. I would love to hear more about the alloparental care as well as the milipede behavior, but I'm sure you'll add to these in the future. I made some minor edits concern style and grammar as well as adding links to the words within the paragraphs. One final note, the weeper-capuchins should be unified in spelling throughout the article, i.e. if it starts with "weeper-capuchin", that term should probably hold throughout the article to avoid any confusion. Timothy Yung TKYung (talk) 05:03, 27 November 2012 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: LittleJerry (talk · contribs) 05:37, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
- I'm quickfailing this nomination. This article is not complete. There's no information on the animals appearence and conservation and the section on its ecology is lacking.
I changed the formatting of some of your references under Appearance and morphology, and habitat and range. I also reworded a few sentences and made a few other minor changes. Relating to the GA review, this article could benefit from a more extensive section on ecology and current status. Njoymusic2 (talk) 08:41, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
Wikipedia Ambassador Program course assignment
editThis article was the subject of an educational assignment at Washington University supported by the Wikipedia Ambassador Program during the 2012 Fall term. Further details are available on the course page.
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