Talk:We Love You, Conrad/GA1

GA Review

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This article is in pretty good shape, with just a few items that need to be addressed.... — Hunter Kahn 20:35, 14 February 2010 (UTC)

Plot

• "...and hooks up with..." "Hooks up with" is not encyclopedic language. Could you reword?

Production

• The source used in the first paragraph mentions Lauren Conrad but does not mention Audrina Patridge. Could you add a source that does?
• The link used as a source for the Sarah Utterback, Todd and other voice actor appearances here seems to be no good. Can you replace it?
• Once they are properly sourced, should Utterback and Todd be added to the list of guest actors in the lead? I'll leave that call up to you.
• This section has no mention of Drew Barrymore's guest performance in "We Love You, Conrad" or the fact that she appeared in previous episodes as Jillian (at least I'm assuming that's the case). Could you add this?

Cultural references

• "The title is a pun on the song of the same name in the musical Bye Bye Birdie." The source doesn't reflect this.
• "The episode also makes references to Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan, actress Lindsay Lohan, and cartoon character Mr. Magoo." Can you expand on what exactly the references were?

I'll place it on hold until these can be addressed. Thanks! — Hunter Kahn 20:35, 14 February 2010 (UTC)

All fixed, and I agree that Kate Todd and Sarah Utterback should be added to the list of guest stars. But about that Lindsay Lohan and Mr. Magoo joke, I can't find a source that says more than "The Lindsay Lohan and Mr. Magoo joke was original and funny" (IGN). - Pancake (talk) 18:45, 15 February 2010 (UTC)

GA Checklist

GA review (see here for criteria)

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1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   Nice work! That's a pass! — Hunter Kahn 18:50, 15 February 2010 (UTC)