Talk:Ward Meachum

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Tkukler in topic Sentence

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"After Iron Fist was blamed for the death of Harold (who was killed by a ninja sent by Master Khan), Ward and his niece, Joy Meachum, hired villains to dispose of him" This sentence has FOUR commas convoluting the meaning somewhat. I propose we simplify; "Ward and niece Joy Meachum hired villains to dispose of Iron Fist after Master Khan sent a Ninja to kill Harold, blaming the death on Iron Fist." discussion? Tkukler (talk) 11:56, 24 July 2017 (UTC)Reply