Talk:War of the Antiochene Succession/GA1
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Sainsf in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:58, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:58, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
- Lead
- For an article of this length the lead should at most have two paras.
- Article
- Fairly well-written, so here are a few nitpicks.
- Maybe wikilink "suzerainty" (Background) and "emir" (First phase)
- Duplink: Stephanie of Armenia (Aftermath)
- Rest is flawless to my eyes. Excellently arranged and broad in coverage, bravo!