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"the song while Fabian Marasciullo mixed the song" → "the song, while Fabian Marasciullo handled mixing" with the target
"Thomas McLaren who was" → "Thomas McLaren, who was"
Probably either mention the release was in the United States like the source backs up or add numerous citations to source a various release
Not done you have not mentioned nor does the source say what you are claiming --K. Peake 05:59, 29 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
"bonus track on Pop Smoke's second studio" → "bonus track on Pop Smoke's second" with the wikilink per MOS:LINK2SECT
""War" is a" → "Musically, "War" is a"
"Michael Saponara states that" → "Michael Saponara stated that"
Mention that Saponara stated the croaky rhymes are from Pop Smoke and the high-pitched croon is from Lil Tjay; ask if you are confused about how to word this
""high-pitched croon."" → ""high-pitched croon"." per MOS:QUOTE
"He continues, saying" → "He continued, saying"
"them disposed of."" → "them disposed of"."
"comments that the song" → "commented that the song"
The Ultimate Boss Thank you for having a go, I have pointed out above where things remain unaddressed. --K. Peake 05:59, 29 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
The Ultimate Boss I can you have been active but not completed the fixes yet... please try to soon. --K. Peake 07:50, 29 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
The Ultimate Boss✓Pass and I added the three remaining changes for you since they were only minor, but I advise you in the future to not ignore when reviewers mention you for only a few fixes because it is common practice to respond in scenarios like these where it's on your part to do so, especially when easy. --K. Peake 06:40, 30 January 2021 (UTC)Reply