Talk:Wake Up Call (KSI song)

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:12, 8 February 2021 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Got a few GANs on hold but that is only because users haven't finished their responses yet, so I'll review this. --K. Peake 06:12, 8 February 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
• "It is a pop-rap track. The song's lyrics" → "A pop-rap track, its lyrics"

 Done

• "finally accepting KSI's success." → "finally accepting his success."

 Done

• "and it reached" → "and it further reached"

 Done

• "Netherlands and New Zealand." → "the Netherlands and New Zealand."

 Done

• Remove wikilink on costume

 Done

Background

• Why isn't this or a similar section at the start of the article's body?

 Done

Music and lyrics

• Verse–chorus form and the length are both unsourced

•  Not done you have still kept this --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

• There is information from 4 and 16 about the music and vocals that can easily be added here; take the chorus, synths and bass for example

 Done

• "KSI continued," → "He continued,"

 Done

Release and promotion

• "revealing the song's title as" → "revealing the title as"

 Done

 Not done you should implement the above version, not an altered one --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

• "debut studio album, Dissimulation (2020)." → "debut studio album Dissimulation (2020)."

 Done

 Partly done remove the comma --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

• Wikilink YouTube

 Done

• "using the hashtag" → "using the challenge's hashtag"

 Done

• The replacement and verses info is not sourced; only the release and features are

 Done

Critical reception

• Remove target on synth

 Done

• Remove target on bass

 Done

• Remove target on instrumentation

 Done

• "Dominiq remarked that" → "He remarked that"

 Done

• "this current generation."" → "this current generation"." per MOS:QUOTE

 Done

Music video

• Wikilink music video

 Done

• "by Nayip Ramos.[19] The music video was" → "by Nayip Ramos and was" since the two sentences are too short to be separate, plus [19] should solely be at the end of the sentence

 Done

• "The music video was released" → "The video was released"

 Done

 Not done --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

• "The video stars both artists and" → "The video stars KSI and Trippie Redd alongside"

 Done

• Where is the dance troupe mentioned?

•  Not done it is still there but unsourced

• Remove wikilink on costumes

 Done

• Remove target on behind-the-scenes footage

 Done

 Not done --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

• "Speaking about the costumes" → "Discussing the costumes"

 Done

• ""[It was] one" → ""[It was o]ne"

 Done

Commercial performance

• "was the country's second-most" → "was the second-most"

 Done

• The number of weeks it spent on the second chart is not mentioned, so just change to writing about the number seven debut

 Done

• The Hungary and Netherlands positions are top 30, so should be mentioned in the prose

 Done

• "In Australia, the song" → "Elsewhere, in Australia, the song" since that is a different continent

 Done

• Is Billboard really needed in the title of the Canadian chart just because the magazine publishes it?

 Done

Live performance

• Move the live performance to Release and promotion, as this is only one para

 Done

Credits and personnel

• Songwriter should come before vocals in the credits order

 Done

Charts

• Are you sure the Australia Hip Hop/R&B chart is notable?

 Done

Release history

• Good

See also

• Good

References

• Copyvio score is too high for the Tone Deaf ref; cut down the level of quoting to fix this

 Done

• Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool

 Done

• Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 2

 Done

• Cite Vice as work/website instead for ref 5

 Done

• Fix MOS:CAPS issues with refs 9 and 25

 Done

• Cite GRM Daily as publisher instead for refs 10, 15 and 18, plus only keep the wikilink for 10

 Done

 Partly done it has not been changed to publisher --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

• Cite TikTok as publisher instead for ref 13 and remove it from the title

 Done

• Remove or replace refs 22 and 40 per WP:RSP

•  Not done this is about the unreliable Metro refs --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

• Cite auspOp as publisher instead for ref 36

 Done

External links

• Good

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but a problem I noticed that is common with your articles is that you did not expand the music and lyrics even when the sources have sufficient info to do so. --K. Peake 09:21, 8 February 2021 (UTC)

• Timwikisidemen I have gone over where you have missed some things above. --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

• Timwikisidemen You still need to remove the Metro refs and if there aren't any other sources for the info they provide, then delete that. --K. Peake 15:59, 12 February 2021 (UTC)

• Timwikisidemen Any plans to follow through with the above soon? --K. Peake 17:03, 14 February 2021 (UTC)

• Timwikisidemen Thank you for removing the bad source; you had left some info there that was not backed up by the other refs but I deleted that since it was merely one sentence and an adjective. ✓ Pass now, took a little longer than usual but to your avail evidently! --K. Peake 18:49, 14 February 2021 (UTC)