Talk:Wake Me Up (Girls Aloud song)/GA1

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Calvin999 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 12:14, 6 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

General
Info box
  • Do an external link for the music video too like on "Love Machine"
      Done - Saulo Talk to Me 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • Use a time length template.
      Done - Saulo Talk to Me 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
Lead
Background and release
  • Link Polydor, Xenomania, Girls Aloud etc.
      Done - Saulo Talk to Me 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • ""When the second album came round, the label said, 'Listen, we're not going to do this group any more if you don't do it.'" Higgins explained." → "Higgin's explained that Polydor were not going to continue with the group's contract unless he produced songs for the album" (Apply this to "Love Machine", it escaped my eyes).
      Done - Saulo Talk to Me 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • "I think my initial reaction was to do a few tracks and he said, 'No, you have to do this because I think you're the only person who understands exactly what it is'. So, that's how we took it on." → He continued, saying that his initial reaction was that he thought he would only be required to produce a couple of songs, however Polydor insisted that he produce the album in its entirety and that they thought only he understood what they wanted." (Apply this to "Love Machine").
      Done - Saulo Talk to Me 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • "it was deemed too hard sounding and the record company didn't want to take the risk." → Use what I wrote about this in the lead here. Also, a source?
      Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • There is no commentary on the alternate cover, so it needs to go.
      Removed - Saulo Talk to Me 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
Critical reception
  • As I said above, make a Composition section. Or if you feel that both sections would be too short, rename it simply to "Composition and critical reception". And then put the audio file here.
      Done - Saulo Talk to Me 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
Chart performance
  • Pretty short, I'd just move it to the Charts section above the table and have it all as one section.
      Done - Saulo Talk to Me 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • "on the Official Charts Company in the United Kingdom" → "on the UK Singles Chart"
      Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
Live performances

"Girls Aloud perform" → "the group performed"

Charts
  • Apply the WP:ACCESS with the shaded column like on "Love Machine"
References
  • FN1 isn't a review??
      Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • FN2: Link BBC and BBC News
      Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • Whenever you mention a work or publisher for the first time, link it. All subsequent times should not be linked. Check for this.
      Done - Saulo Talk to Me 02:24, 7 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
Status

On hold for 7 days. (Little tip, apply things mentioned here to other nominations of yours). AARONTALK 12:53, 6 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

Passing. AARONTALK 02:27, 7 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
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