Talk:Wake Island rail

Latest comment: 10 months ago by 2600:1700:AF70:19F0:1D52:73BA:7163:64E0 in topic Massive run-on sentence in the Extinction section

This article lacks a photo.Agre22 (talk) 20:06, 6 August 2008 (UTC)agre22Reply

Massive run-on sentence in the Extinction section edit

"This was a direct result of the presence of thousands of starving Japanese troops stranded on the island after a U.S. blockade of the island took place as a direct result of the Japanese invasion and occupation of Wake Island in December 1941, in addition combined with the inevitable habitat destruction resulting from military altercations and extensive aerial bombardment by the Japanese and U.S. during World War II."

I count 68 words in that sentence. Needs to be rewritten 2600:1700:AF70:19F0:1D52:73BA:7163:64E0 (talk) 04:46, 18 June 2023 (UTC)Reply