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The style of this article is rather informal at the present. I changed the repeated uses of the subject's first name to his last, or a pronoun, and deleted a section (Art and Traveling) that I felt was not notable. The subject appears to be notable, but improvement of the article's style and removal of excessive personal details would make it easier to tell whether or not it is, and additional references in third-party sources would support the assertion of notability.--Opus 113 (talk) 02:29, 1 June 2010 (UTC)