Talk:Vladimir Lysenko
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This is my article. I am from Russia, and I am not native English speaker. What's why I ask anybody to improve this my article, especially my English. Thank you in advance.СОРАН (talk) 10:42, 4 September 2009 (UTC)
Copy edit edit
I removed the lengthy lists from this article. They were laundry lists, and appeared to have been copied from sources listed in the provided links (see WP:COPYVIO). The minutiae of Lysenko's trips don't seem relevant to an encyclopedia article. Where relevant, I included the information as prose.
I trimmed back on the number of photographs—the article looked like a Flickr account—but even so, there may still be too many of them. I invite others to help choose which ones deserve to stay.
I refactored the lengthy list of bare URLs into inline citations and external links. Some of the listed links went to redundant material and were therefore omitted. // ⌘macwhiz (talk) 16:05, 29 January 2011 (UTC)
Biographical information edit
Although this article lists Lysenko's exploits, there's very little information present about the man himself. The article needs to be expanded with biographical details. // ⌘macwhiz (talk) 16:05, 29 January 2011 (UTC)