Talk:Vincent and the Doctor/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 21:21, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to review this article shortly. I'll give it a read through now and add any points below. If I see anything that's quick and easy to fix, I'll do it myself, but if I inadvertently change something important please by all means revert that edit. Miyagawa (talk) 21:21, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

Plot

"The Church at Auvers" shouldn't be linked in the image caption as you've already linked it in the main body of the article.

Done 18:00, 5 February 2012 (UTC)

Could "around when he painted the church" be re-worded slightly, as he painted the painting, not the church. Special apologies for the nitpick, I'm not normally that bad!

Done. Glimmer721 ^talk 18:00, 5 February 2012 (UTC)

Same again with "begins painting the church" - perhaps something along the lines of "begins creating the painting of the church".

Done. Glimmer721 ^talk 18:00, 5 February 2012 (UTC)

At the mention of Mr. Black, it should have Bill Nighy in parenthesis afterwards.

Done. Glimmer721 ^talk 18:00, 5 February 2012 (UTC)

Casting and filming

"Cafe Terrace at Night" shouldn't be linked in the image caption as you've already linked it in the main body of the article.

Done. Glimmer721 ^talk 18:00, 5 February 2012 (UTC)

Broadcast and reception

Any figures available for the first broadcast in the USA (presumably BBC America)?

I wish, but it seems the only episodes that get reported are ones that break records; I can only find "The Waters of Mars", The End of Time, "The Eleventh Hour", "A Christmas Carol", and "The Impossible Astronaut". BBC America is cable and not a well-known cable channel at that, sadly. Glimmer721 ^talk 18:00, 5 February 2012 (UTC)

Critical reception

Smith "didn't get much to work with". - needs to have a citation directly after the fullstop (even though it's the one after the next sentence).

Done. Glimmer721 ^talk 18:00, 5 February 2012 (UTC)

"terrifically clever, funny, likeable wildly surreal episode". - same as directly above. Also the following three sentences have the same problem. Quotes unfortunately need direct citations even if it ends up repeating the same citation ten times through a single paragraph.

Done. Glimmer721 ^talk 18:00, 5 February 2012 (UTC)

Fourth paragraph has the same issue.

Done. Glimmer721 ^talk 18:00, 5 February 2012 (UTC)

References

34 - Need to drop the extra full stop from "Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America Inc.." It adds one automatically, so just drop the single full stop you've put in there.

Done. Glimmer721 ^talk 18:00, 5 February 2012 (UTC)

That should be everything. A very interesting read about an episode I remember fondly. Miyagawa (talk) 21:44, 4 February 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! I believe everything should be fixed. Glimmer721 ^talk 18:00, 5 February 2012 (UTC)

Great, happy to pass this as I believe it now meets all the GA requirements. Miyagawa (talk) 18:07, 5 February 2012 (UTC)