Talk:Vere Bird Jr./GA2
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Wizardman in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:42, 20 July 2011 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:42, 20 July 2011 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- I'd change portfolio to ministry, just to make it easier on readers.
- "he was given the portfolio of Aviation," perhaps change to "given the position of.."
- Done. I only found one instance of "portfolio," which I have changed to "ministry". A fluffernutter is a sandwich! (talk) 03:26, 22 July 2011 (UTC)
- "Bird's career in the Cabinet was finally ended by scandal in 1990" take out finally.
Just those couple small things. I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:04, 22 July 2011 (UTC)
- Looks good, article now passes. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:29, 22 July 2011 (UTC)